What do you think of my trance productions?

Ericlingus

Prettiest Hair Around
Oct 31, 2006
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Hey I know this isnt what a lot of you guys are probably in to but I value your opinions. What do you think of my trance tracks I made? First time i've ever made an electronica song. I usually do metal and have been trying to fuse together metal with electronica. I've been working on my electronica production skills so I decided to make some pure electronica songs. What do you think? They are pretty raw mixes. Are they a good start? What do you think of the songs themselves?

Here is the first one I did

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?id=29621

And the second


http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?id=29622
 
is the second track too bass heavy? My friend says it has this annoying sound too it like someone who cranks the bass in their car stereo system where it rattles.