Writing

Scavneck

Ominous Bloodvomit
May 20, 2006
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Belgrade, Serbia
Would like to know from you guys if I'm on the right path here.

If anyone else wants to post their writing.. that would be cool.


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Ominous Black Mattress


A black mattress spreading fast upon mankind's throne

Eternal hordes of walking animal carcass now stand atone

Gaining more strength from every single human life that's gone

Victorious, giving life to a sore tone



Now that they have shared their crimson flesh with their master

For the last time but now faster

The sky is embedded in spraying human blood blocking out the sun

If not beast the only useless choice is now to run



Once breeding humanity converted to ashes and vestiges

Is now levitating around the passage of the animal battalions

Every arsenal ceases to exist as growling sound waves quiver bones



Death inhabitation causing life emigration

Human regrets do not exist in the brave new walking hell

Human remains purposeless dwell

Human laws unbalanced, Nature laws balanced



A lonesome bride takes her last breath

As ubiquitous inferno takes over men's pride

Death, becoming welcomed as a distress side effect

Through throat aching blaring screams

Through delirium the equilibrium restored once again.
 
thats pretty sweet scav, looks like it will be a difficult one to sing. At first I was like animals wft? but then it got way sweet.
I think this could be a good thread for ppl to help each other out with lyrics, so I'll post some I've been working on later.
 
Here's some of mine...

FATE OF MIND​
Fate,
The piece of life we try to find
Mindless pods,
The people who spend their life trying to find it
Religion,
The shell you hide in to find yourself
You are slaves, slaves to your own self
Wanderer of fiction you…
I stand above

I am the answer
I am the one
I am Satan
I am God

Follow me and you will see,
I am fiction, your reality
I'll show you the light (the darkness within),
The light to which I hide

Worship me

Your fate, my choice
Your mind, my hand
Soldiers of neglect
(disciples of my kind),
Yourself
Can't you see?



You Die For Me​
I am burning inside
Dying to feel your final breath
To feel your dead cold cunt
Beautiful blue black lips…

I quiver as I touch them
Covered in goose bumps you are
As I taste your once quivering clit

And play with your matted hair,
Bloody and congealed

I dream of you
I feel attraction
I live for you
You die for me
You are my slave
My sexual crutch
I am your completer
You're just dead without me​
 
Heres some I've been working on for a while.

Summoning the Impaler

In the depths of a storm ridden night
Beneath crypts ancient of years
The stench of rotting soil assails my nostrils
Finally I have found the remains of the dread
Impaler
Cast down was he
Bloodthirsty
Insatiable
The great Dracul
I examine the withered husk
The mighty skull of the vampyre
The wicked fangs still stained a dark brown
Of dried blood
How many throats
Did these daemonic jaws pierce
I light the candles
Draw the circle
I invoke the sky
Invoke the woods
I invoke the powers of all that is darkness
Lightning flash
Light goes black
I can hear the screams of the damned
Arise, oh warrior of old
Feast on the blood
More precious than gold
I summon thee to awaken
Hissing shrieks belch forth
From his corpse
I see his eyes
Soulless black orbs
Daemonic grin
The bony arm
Reaches out
Grasps me by the throat
He whispers
“Thou hath summoned the Impaler.
The servant of the unholy and master of wolves
I will drink from the wellspring of thy throat,
And sate my thirst with the liquor of thine
Life-blood”
I feel the fangs shred my throat
I feel the stake pierce me through
I have no time
I am impaled
What have I unleashed?

Iron Pierces Flesh

When iron pierces flesh
The sword and axe grow stronger
The eyes are opened wide
The taste of blood grows sweeter

My vision turns to red
The dark and light combine
All the world is crimson
Morbid visions that are mine

The soil growing darker
Still slaughter rages on

I try to count the ways
Of my mutilation
And as awareness fades
The wounds awaken

Iron shreds the flesh
Form no longer exists
Insubstantial
Living gore

Slithering entrails
Serpents of mine own flesh
I become the elements
And creatures of the dark
I am become many
And vengeance smells sweet

When iron pierces flesh
I become much stronger
My eyes are opened wide
The taste of blood grows sweeter

Devouring the Gore

Broken bodies
Entombed in sunset and dust
Lying ‘midst the rivers of filth
Pillars of the slain pierce the sky
Monuments to ancient gods of blood
Runlets of putrid fluid
Ragged wisps of cloud
Cast shadows down
Vast expanse of open field
Decomposing
Monuments crumble
Shrines of death waste away
The flies consume
Maggots crawl
Ravenous swarms of
The congregation
Devouring the gore
Rancid chapels of horrid worship
Battlefield an altar of sacrifice
Baptized in the innards of the fallen ones
We are the carrion
Devouring the gore
We admire
Your crimson luster
As we consume
We pray to you
Bestow your blessings
You are the embodiment
Of our desires
You portray
The purity of ruin
And when we die
We become you


Accursed

The lights burn my eyes
I am lost
Curse that hated sun
Let me rest

I have tried to find
A way
To see

The stars above snicker
I am falling
Curse the night-sky
Let me rest

I have tried to find
A way
To triumph

Around the bend I see
The void that
Has been calling me
At last the struggle
Is won

I’ve been striving for so long
To reach
This place

I have tried to find
You

Emptiness Realized

Vacant spheres
Stare at empty walls
Silence reigns in
Empty spaces

Amongst the twilight halls
Walk the shadows of light
Reflections of what once roamed
In places once alive

Summers grace has abandoned
This forsaken place
Silence reigns in
Empty spaces

Moonlight sovereign
Lights the way
The sun caged
By the day

Loneliness
Forever isolated
In the corner
In the dark



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Staring at me
She smiles wickedly
Sipping the wine
Of the weakness of Man
Savoring the sweetness
Of the human soul
Relishing the bitterness
Of sorrows untold
Holding the flame
Just out of reach
She bids me to touch
The forbidden peaks
Wisdom for gain
Pleasures to seek
All the desires
To tempt the meek
This witch enthroned
On dreams made bleak
A Queen of nightmares
Cursing our kind
 
Pretty crappy texts/lyrics ahead, be warned! :p

The doom is here (or something, I haven't figured out the title yet)

In the darkness we've gone astray
There's extinction on this way
No-one will know our names
They took everything we had
Turned all our hopes into sand
They said it was the work of the hand
Of their merciless, powerfull God
Whom which they follow
He who will devour us all
And imprison our souls
In chains of evisceration

Oh, your doom is here
And all you feared
The end is near
So bow down to me


In the darkness there's something strange
Like a beacon in some way
Which leads to our own graves
We're already dead
And all that we've dread
Is truth now
We're all victims
Of their merciless, powerfull God
Whom which they follow
I, I am ready to die
And so I leave this world behind
Far beyond all hopes of ressurection

Oh, your doom is here
And all you feared
The end is near
So bow down to me
Your bodies I will slaughtered
Your souls I will devour
And upon your graves
I will breed a new race




Banished From Heaven

Blood from inside me
Races to come outside me
Life that once was me
Is no longer feeding me

Will I be alive after I've ceased to live?

By night i am blinded
I cannot see
Lucifer greets me
The light deceits me

The judgement has been done
A sinner I've become

Banished from heaven
Welcomed in Hell
 
Looks like we've got quite the group of writers here, good material guys!
Viewer my fav part of yours was these lines
"Follow me and you will see,
I am fiction, your reality"
Thats sweet.