Need some quick opinions

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My band and I are in the process of finalizing structuring for songs and all that, but I came up with an idea for 1 more song so were gonna give that a shot...Its like a 50 second clip of the same part being looped...Its all scratch plus the bass isnt recorded yet and the drums still need some work so the quality isnt good and i dont care about that at the moment.

My singer and I can't agree as to if the song should open with this part...or close with it...To me it comes off as more of an "end of the song part" where as my singer is the opposite...I was thinking of possibly opening with this and then adding more parts to it and using it for the end as well...Either way im open to ideas.

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/854969/may%2024%202nd%20idea.mp3