Recent content by Dasim

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    First real original song, more on the way!

    it's supposed to be lo fi haha. I don't even use distortion, just overdrive. And yeah somewhere along the line the bass drum became drowned out. haha I'm no vocalist and have only been doing it for a couple of weeks, but thanks for the feedback!
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    First real original song, more on the way!

    Hey guys, I've recently started a solo black metal project and would really appreciate some feedback. I've recently uploaded the first real song I have created, but the next song I will be releasing is of better quality (at least I believe so). Thank you!
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    New song...working on another song too

    Hi guys, this is the first actual song I've made and I'm currently working on another song that I'm much more excited about. But a follow on soundcloud and some constructive criticism is always welcome. Thank you!
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    Can someone check out my music and give me some constructive criticism please?

    Thanks man, I really appreciate it. Considering the positive feedback I'm getting, I'm pretty excited to release something new
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    Can someone check out my music and give me some constructive criticism please?

    @Gargamel Bojangles yeah I feel the same way actually. I know I'm capable of creating better music, but considering I spent less than 4 hours creating and recording this, there wasn't much I could do. But I will definitely be improving my music and spend more time on it. @The Butt haha thanks...
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    Can someone check out my music and give me some constructive criticism please?

    Thanks for the tip Black Orifice, that idea definitely did cross my mind, but since I had a deadline to meet I didn't have time to record another guitar, but I will do that in the future. and yeah I'm going to experiment with using an actual microphone to record the instruments and see how that...
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    Can someone check out my music and give me some constructive criticism please?

    Hey, so I've recently started a black metal solo project and would really appreciate some feedback, but firstly, I'll give you guys a little bit of background. So I was given a piece of homework, biology specifically, and we had to put biology related lyrics over a song and make it a...
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    Can someone check out my music and give me some constructive criticism please?

    Haha no I won't steal it, why not upload it to your soundcloud? but now that you mention it, I hope no one steals any of mine o.o
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    Can someone check out my music and give me some constructive criticism please?

    Thanks a lot man! Yeah the riffing is pretty typical, but I'm working on this new song that takes a more depressive side to it. As soon as my phantom power supply arrives I'll work on recording. As for the lyrics, they're all about the heart and the cardiac cycle haha. Stuff about atrial and...
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    Solo Djent/Progressive Metal Project

    That was really impressive man. You definitely have great skill and talent
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    Can someone check out my music and give me some constructive criticism please?

    Hey, so I've recently started a black metal solo project and would really appreciate some feedback, but firstly, I'll give you guys a little bit of background. So I was given a piece of homework, biology specifically, and we had to put biology related lyrics over a song and make it a...