Recent content by HeroicThomas

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    Generic Metalcore, Please Critique

    It's not guitar rig, it's just the fact that i recorded into freeware. it records in 16 bit :P and yeah there's a high pass and a low pass, and a small bit of eq before distortion. i've tried like all of those amp sims, can't get a single one to sound how i like and yeah, i agree drums are...
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    FEMALE FRONTED ROCK GROUP! (Only 2 girls, both 17!)

    i think midway through the verse, where the strumming rhythm changes on the guitars, the kick should back it up? but that might be too metal of an idea :P
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    Generic Metalcore, Please Critique

    thanks for your input man. yeah i feel you. the cymbals are too low. the kick just a bit too high. And i was going for kind of a Woe is me type effect with the dblue. ill tinker around with ittt i honestly don't know what to do about the guitars. i've eq'd them everyway imaginable out the...
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    Generic Metalcore, Please Critique

    so umm yeah i don't typically write music this generic but i just needed something to test my sound before i started recording my band's shit. I'm going to point it out before you, yes the snare is AWFUL! I'm going to change that asap, so critique everything else until then. Cleans are a bit...
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    Great drum samples for ya all!

    You're a god, these are incredible in my opinion thanks so much
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    Metalcore/deathcore deep bass kick mixing?

    dog, asking alexandria is slate all the way check those out
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    Asking Alexandria Tone Test Mix

    yeah i agree with everything said above. Look for a thicker kick. even ones that sound a bit too low on high end by themselves will sound more clicky-ish in the mix. but good god what are you using for tone? pod farm i assume? what are you recording guitar through?
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    Melodic Hardcore/Metal One of my first mixes!

    i think its great for a beininer mix. yeah i hear alot of defeater in it like the intro guitars. i agree bring down the verb :) i love defeater.
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    Metalcore from portugal

    very nice!!! im impressed! bring up the snare a bit, and maybe, if it sounds good, bring down the kick just a little!
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    My take on Djenty Metalcore

    i absolutely hate it when people tell me how i should write my song "you should scream more" or "you should add cleans to that part" but, in my opinion i think the intro should just continue into the actual song without the tape stop thing :)
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    Assistant To The Regional Manager - The Devil Wears Prada Cover

    just a little more delay on the intro guitar, just to be fair to the original :) the ryhthm sounds very airy, and there's a lot of mids that give it like a "scrubby" sound in some of the chugs specially at 0:40 its really noticable. maybe a bit less room on the toms. i agree with the...
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    New Metalcore Mix

    very very good! i'm impressed hugely with both the quality and mix and the actual music
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    Mix tell me what you think guys

    yeah the second mix is alot better, your tone kicks so much ass very nice! please upload with vocals :)
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    Cyanide Post-hardcore mix, full retake, could use some hard criticism.

    i like what you tried to on the intro, but i dont think that the instrumentals come in heavy enough. try adding like a bass drop, but dont make it so noticible it sounds like youre following the fad of adding ridiculous bass drops to anything closely resembling a breakdown, but one subtle enough...
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    2nd Sucks Mix

    if you cut up the chugs looking for less attack in the following chug, try using a stomp crompressor