veil of maya

I just released this mixtest of Mikasa by Veil of Maya. I'm still an amateur on audio engineering,I'd be glad for any advices and tips.

In the following link you can listen my mixtest of The other half of me by Born of osiris. I'm open to any critics,I'm not a pro on this. You can contact me at matteo.raccone@gmail.com if you want your songs or cover edited and mixed at very low prices since I want to start to make my own...