5150 test tone, attempting/failing The Acacia Strain (Wormwood) HELP!

[jsaudio]

Hey guys just bought a 5150 and im working on a test tone trying to get something close to the acacia strain wormwood album....failing

any advice on this tone/ mix would be nice, dont pay attention to the song too much literally wrote it in like less than 5 mins just needed something to test tones on.

I think one of the biggest problems i am having is the bass tone but any help would be apprecaited

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9463730/Breakdown tone 3.mp3

 

[everybody's x]

turn them up?

maybe a tad more presence a hair less gain