CarlBlomqvist
Here to learn
Cool. I think you should focus more on basing the music more around the catchy types of 8-bit game melodies you've got (see 1:23, 3:41, 4:17, 5:02 (even though I didn't like the chromatic ending)). You've made some great arpeggios in this song, I like it! Then of course, add in some groovy djents here and there Anyway, great job, but the songwriting def. has room for improvement!
Cheers
Carl.
Cheers
Carl.