A newly written song I need feedback on please

Dylan S

Celephai
Feb 27, 2009
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Hey guys,

I've been away for a few weeks and I came back and wanted to write some music, so here is a new song incorporating some different sounding influences to what you might be used to hearing from me, but still maintaining a lot of awesome death metal stuff. I only wrote it last night so it's definitely subject to change, but I'm mostly after comments on the composition, and not the entire mix, seeing as it's just 2 rough guitar tracks and an Addictive Drums preset, but if anyone has any comments about things I can fix (keeping in mind there is no bass) I'd be appreciative. :)

Think Behemoth/Nile mixed with maybe a little Fear Factory (in the start) and then I guess Nevermore and...Iron Maiden?

https://files.getdropbox.com/u/1044020/SRS BSNS.mp3
 
sounds cool man. sounds quite full for no bass!

quite like that AD kick too!