advice needed :) sample in here

[Bereavement]

Hi Guys, I am mixing a inflames clay man cover, I would love to hear some feedbacks, advice or criticism I feel it lack of punches, any advice on that please? thanks alot

version 1
http://www.sendspace.com/file/oo3h81

version 2
http://www.sendspace.com/file/cxv0ge

these versions difference kinda subtle by the way.

 

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been keep trying out 2 days, this is the lastest version I worked. please give me some advices to this noob

I feel the mix still very crowded and pretty dirty , also the snare drowned in the verse, please give me some pointers or tell me how you think about the mix. thanks so much

http://www.esnips.com/doc/11e7a37b-ad8b-47f9-a106-a1ba6f9c7f79/claymanv10

 

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anyone please ? desperately need some advice for my mix sound too dull

 

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Sounds good. Just bring up the high end sizzle in the guitars and overheads. Vox and the kick could come up a little in the mix too.

I like the guitar sound.

 

[Bereavement]

Sounds good. Just bring up the high end sizzle in the guitars and overheads. Vox and the kick could come up a little in the mix too.

I like the guitar sound.

Thanks so much for your input
so you think the dullness in the mix was the overheads and guitar's sound not enough sheen?

yeah, I do think the kick and vocal seems drowned in the mix a bit.
thanks again for your input and I will try again and post up on here

 

[Tommy Gun]

Sounds to me like the guitars just need to come down a touch, and MAYBE try rolling off some off the high end in the area mics.