Alexi Artwork..

[MetalWarheart666]

Yeah.. during my March Break I drew some pictures. They aren't the greatest since I didn't spend days working on it. Tell me what you think

 

[spirit crusher]

I´m no artist and I´m no art critic, but I can tell when something looks like a 3 year old drew it. No offence or anything..

 

[Enemy242]

better than what i can do, but his face in the last one looks kinda like a hockey mask. other than that they seem good to me.

 

[MetalWarheart666]

Bryan Of Bodom:



Thanks....

 

[MetalWarheart666]

better than what i can do, but his face in the last one looks kinda like a hockey mask. other than that they seem good to me.

thanks andrew . I actually had a hard time working on his face in the second one. its kinda hard working from black and white pictures...

 

[Ralf]

hmm...
first drawing:
-proportions - his head is too big, his legs too short, and he looks like he is pregnant
-there is something seriously wrong with the perspective of the guitar
-left arm is disturbing
-I'm not going to coment facial expression, I haven't seen real photo. But he looks like some alien insect
-pencil - this drawing isn't finished, more color, more life, more dimention,
-and that something that he is standing in, wtf?

second drawing:
-this one is much better, I could even risk saying it can be repaired and look pretty good.
-face and hair are ok, I don't like that kind of drawing but that's just a matter of taste there's nothing wrong in it.
-guitar... FOCUS when drawing, were your hands shakin or you were looking on a ceiling drawing this. This axe looks like rubber.

I'm not trying to flame you, this is just my opinion.

 

[MetalWarheart666]

Thanks for your opinion, Ralf. Atleast its backed up with reasons why you like or not..

 

[spirit crusher]

hmm...
first drawing:
-proportions - his head is too big, his legs too short, and he looks like he is pregnant
-there is something seriously wrong with the perspective of the guitar
-left arm is disturbing
-I'm not going to coment facial expression, I haven't seen real photo. But he looks like some alien insect
-pencil - this drawing isn't finished, more color, more life, more dimention,
-and that something that he is standing in, wtf?

second drawing:
-this one is much better, I could even risk saying it can be repaired and look pretty good.
-face and hair are ok, I don't like that kind of drawing but that's just a matter of taste there's nothing wrong in it.
-guitar... FOCUS when drawing, were your hands shakin or you were looking on a ceiling drawing this. This axe looks like rubber.

I'm not trying to flame you, this is just my opinion.

thats what i was trying to say, in my amateur opinion.

 

[MetalWarheart666]

Then you would have said it yourself.

thanks for the opinions.....

 

[LazyGuitar]

Bryan lol:

Yeah, they're okay, the face is abit....wrong, I wouldn't look at em again, but they're better than anything I can do.

 

[LedByTheReaper]

they're cool. at least you made an effort

and to bryan, go on draw better

 

[bobvex]

"Really?
Took me, like, three hours to finish the shading on your upper lip.
It's probably the best drawing I've ever done."



I can't see them now, they are blocked at work, but I'll check em out when i get home.

 

[spirit crusher]

Then you would have said it yourself.

thanks for the opinions.....

*sigh* why is it that people from the dirty shwa don´t have an IQ higher than 6....it blows my mind. If hadnt noticed, Ralf obviously has a background in art, as I do not. Therefore what Ralf said is what I was attempting to say very unprofessionally. Its obvious enough that i know absolutely nothing about the technicalities of critiquing art.

 

[ND24/7]

I would personnaly suggest that you'd need to focus more on the directional lines of the character, it should give your drawing more dimension... the optical illusion of 3d with all parallel lines in a same part.

There's just too much blank parts ...and parts all dirty shading. Like no middle between them..

Like Ralf said....yeah the angle of the guitar is screwed up if you look at the side of it. Also...the fret boards looks as thick as a sheet of paper.

What I found cool is his Right Arm and his Hair.

In a conclusion, easy on the dark shading and try to add some level...like lines to make his clothes like if they were folding.

 

[ND24/7]

"Really?
Took me, like, three hours to finish the shading on your upper lip.
It's probably the best drawing I've ever done."



I can't see them now, they are blocked at work, but I'll check em out when i get home.

It's still better than what Napoleon did for Tricia...

 

[MetalWarheart666]

*sigh* why is it that people from the dirty shwa don´t have an IQ higher than 6....it blows my mind. If hadnt noticed, Ralf obviously has a background in art, as I do not. Therefore what Ralf said is what I was attempting to say very unprofessionally. Its obvious enough that i know absolutely nothing about the technicalities of critiquing art.

I just live here, I wasn't born here

Anyway, the background on my last comment is that you completely dissed my drawings saying it looked like a 3 year old did it. Ralf's opinions were backed up with positives and negatives not bullshit like what you said

 

[MetalWarheart666]

I would personnaly suggest that you'd need to focus more on the directional lines of the character, it should give your drawing more dimension... the optical illusion of 3d with all parallel lines in a same part.

There's just too much blank parts ...and parts all dirty shading. Like no middle between them..

Like Ralf said....yeah the angle of the guitar is screwed up if you look at the side of it. Also...the fret boards looks as thick as a sheet of paper.

What I found cool is his Right Arm and his Hair.

In a conclusion, easy on the dark shading and try to add some level...like lines to make his clothes like if they were folding.

Thanks

I'll take that into consideration if I ever draw again

 

[MetalWarheart666]

"Really?
Took me, like, three hours to finish the shading on your upper lip.
It's probably the best drawing I've ever done."



I can't see them now, they are blocked at work, but I'll check em out when i get home.

You are so good... and you are right

 

[bobvex]

You are so good... and you are right

it's from a movie

 

[brightkelly]

"Really?
Took me, like, three hours to finish the shading on your upper lip.
It's probably the best drawing I've ever done."



I can't see them now, they are blocked at work, but I'll check em out when i get home.

My network is worse. I live in China, and my government always block some websites, and recently I can't view the photos from photobucket, I'm not sure if the government blocked this one, I need to ask my friends in China to see if they can view photobucket. I feel pissed off.
Can you see my signature, the Daraemon? It's on photobucket and I CAN'T SEE IT!