An experimental thing i'm writing. please listen and comment.

[Will Bozarth]

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0Q5L84LNAGBTN3A3A3ONOLPYDM

 

[George Orwell]

Sounds good. The first part is quite normal...what I liked the most was just before the uptempo part where the dissonances are.

The middle section sounded a little to much "Nintendo" to me, but that's probably because is made with midi.

 

[Det Som Engang Var]

The beggining was awesome. Kind of reminded me of Castlevania. Near the one minute mark it gets even better. I'd love to hear it with real instruments.

 

[ZANEX]

Subtle but witty. I liked the "build up" part.

 

[Brett]

That's some strong songwriting.

Excellent job, dude.

 

[Will Bozarth]

thanks, all

 

[WhiteBeastofWotan]

SHIT IT SUX, OMFG DUDE THATS LIKE NUMETAL LAWL OMG YOU SUX


I told you what i think.

 

[Mephistophiliac]

Sounds like its going to be an epic.

Looking forward to a completed song with real instruments.

 

[derek]

That really impressed me. The beginning didn't have me gripped, after the initial part i was enjoying it a great deal.

I tried to imagine it with real instruments as i listened and I think it would sound pretty damn good played with a band.

Liked it, liked it alot.

 

[Will Bozarth]

yeah, i can't wait to hear the final product, final product.

reason the intro didnt have you gripped is because it wasnt supposed to

 

[derek]

^thought never occurred to me, but now you mention it, that kinda fits. Whats the plans for making it into a full song then?

 

[mReEtTaIlRsEkD]

Sounds good!

 

[Will Bozarth]

^thought never occurred to me, but now you mention it, that kinda fits. Whats the plans for making it into a full song then?

just keep writing and writing until either I get bored with it or it completes itself musically by itself

 

[derek]

Good plan. Keep us updated, cause that i definately liked that, so it'd be cool to hear some more.

anyhoo, best wishes

 

[DreamNeonBlack]

ok, what did I do wrong?

I can't hear anything although the file seems to have downloaded properly.

 

[Larf03]

Damn... you've got some nice "Morbid Angelesque" dissonances!!!!!!!!!

That's great works will!

 

[Will Bozarth]

thanks

Dan - raise your midi sequencer volume

 

[neal]

The middle section sounded a little to much "Nintendo" to me, but that's probably because is made with midi.

psht. i want MORE nintendo!

 

[derek]

^AMEN to that

 

[neal]

more nintendo!