Any tips on improving on this...??....maybe finger picked..???

[entanglement]

this is one of hte easier ones to sing and play along to.....!!!!....actualyl Im gonna be youtubing "paterns in teh ivy 2"..pretty soon.....!!!......but tahnx for teh cool feedback..!!!...Keep rockin fellas........PEAC EOUT

Where are you from mate? I can't place that accent..

 

[Ermz]

Well if you really are after tips for improvement:

Try to get a more accurate transcription of the song.

Work a bit on accentuating the vocal vibrato. Half the fun in the Harvest vocal line is the vibrato.

Apart from that, good job. Also, drop the typing style. It was lame before you even started doing it.

 

[waz416c]

Where are you from mate? I can't place that accent..

My nationality is from Pakistan...but was born and raised in Qatar.....!!!>.....and thanx for teh feedback fellas.....!!!!...Ill try teh tips and suggestions...and hopefulyl teh PII2 will be better,..!!!!....PEAC EOUT

 

[entanglement]

Ah, yes. I saw some home-nation in you, thats why I asked

Good work on the cover

 

[Benighted Joe]

Very good... Too bad you sing out of key repetitively at a certain point in the verse I believe.

Keep it up!

 

[Anonymous]

Awesome

 

[all_sins_undone]

shit song shit cover shit video

 

[waz416c]

wow.....really glad ppl diggin it...!!!.....thats aweosme.....Thanx for the aweosme feedback fellas....!!!.....def. makes the effort worth it...!!!.......like I said...PII2 will be up shortly..!!!....cant wait to share more music with ya'll...!!!...Keep rockin......PEAC EOUT

 

[Lothlorien]

very nice, soothing to me. you have a unique voice and the chords were nicely played.