Archaic Cessation

Your singer definitely has the voice, but what I notice is the lack of fire. He requires more fire, so to aid you in this, do not tell him how nice I was, instead tell him that I said fuck you so that he may burn brighter. His voice requires tempering.

The overall instrumentation...It's too repetitive but the general melody is very good, so keep up what you're doing but experiment with changing up the same riff slightly to see if it's better for you.