Asking for feedback (Death Metal)

[J.Lindmann]

Hi there,

I am doing this home-recording thing for 3 years now on an occasional basis.
And I'd like to develop a bit further, so I am asking for a little help.

Here's my current mix.
https://soundcloud.com/wauzista/ooam

I know there's a lot of space for improvement, but
besides performance, what do you think are mixing-wise the 3 biggest issues I need to address in this mix and even in the next upcoming mixes?

I am only asking for the most obvious problems, in order to focus on these specific issues and not to get lost in various work sites which I cannot handle all at once.
Are there any techniques that I need to learn about urgently?

Thanks in advance!

 

[J.Lindmann]

Hmm...too much to name something specific?
Or just not interesting?

 

[Terminus]

IMO it's not very tightly played i.e. timing on the guitars seems sloppy in places.

 

[1111belphegor]

Hi,
Your guitar tone is really good! Also like the general style/feel of the song.
Rhythm guitars and drums need to be better timed though. Simplify and try to make those chugs and kicks sync. Then it will be awesome!

Check my stuff out and please feel free to critique:

http://www.ultimatemetal.com/forum/practice-room/921816-homebrewed-death-how-master.html

Also on youtube:

 

[J.Lindmann]

Yea I already figured that my guitar tone is the least of my problems.
But anyway...do you think it might have too much low-end or may be too midscooped?
In my opinion the guitars could be a bit closer to the listener or more "in your face" if you know what I mean. But I can't quite achieve that even when I try to.

Another point is that it sounds a too unnatural to me.
Guitars are miced but the drums are replaced.
Should I focus on more depth in my drums?

Sloppy playing actually is an issue, but I would like to concentrate on the mixing aspects here.

Check my stuff out and please feel free to critique

Hmmm....I don't think that I am in the position to critiques mixes of others, as I am still not at the level of most home recorders.