Can anyone give some tips and opinions on this track?

[Donkey Fly]

Hi,

A month or so ago we recorded a demo at some place. The drums bass and guitars were recorded together live and then the vocals palced on top afterwards.

Anyway, they sound ok for a Demo but I was wondering if you guys could suggest anything I could do to them to make them sound a bit better.

Like for example, in the top track on the page, one of the cymbals is very loud and sharp. How could I cut this down - bearing in mind I don't have the single tracks - wish I did.

WWW.MYSPACE.COM/ALLHOPELOSTUK

Any input would be greatly appreciated.

 

[xMannequiNx]

if everything is in one track your probably only going to be able to change it with EQ or multiband compression