Can someone please help make everything clearer?

working on a mix now, just gotta fix the drum velocities (a snare @ 127 is clipping my master even with gclip shaving the transients)
 
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1186608/Angelkiller.mp3

There's my attempt at it. Something happened to the kick pattern at ~3:50 and I'm too lazy to reopen Reaper to fix it. The rest should be fine.

I used both L and both R tracks (100%/80%/80%/100% with the inner pairs being -3dB) as well as one center track.
Clean guitars are 70%/70%.
All tracks were downmixed to mono (they were originally in stereo.)

I only used one main vocal and one bg/high vocal. Those two plus the whisper tracks all had a deesser, limiter, and delay on them.
 
That sounds great! PM sent, and here is my most recent take on it, any and all crit MUCH welcome!
I rerecorded the guitars and bass

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5102484/mixtest2.mp3

Only 4 guitar tracks, all mono, 1L, 1R, and 2C. 100/82/82/100

I tried EQing for maximum volume and clarity, but it seems a bit too noisy...but when I try to pass ~8k, the guitars are affected too much.. Could be my headphones? Overall I think this is a better mix than my first try, but I don't think I squeezed everything I can out of it.
 
Wow. Those guitars sound sooooo good! Can I ask what you did to them?

Hahaha
Pretty much nothing
Just highpassed them at 45hz and did some light compression
I think the key was just mixing them together at the right levels. Most of what you hear is just the 100% L and R, I had to pan the middle ones out some and take them way down.