someone can help me with this vocals please?

[mattia.7]

Hi guys..this a cover that i recorded..

http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/666147/voci cover.mp3

i have a lot of problems with the vocals part..can someone help me?what can i do to improve vocals??i use compressor,de-esser and melodyne but i don't like how it sounds..please help me..thank you very much

I upload a new version with new clean vocals and screamo..
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/666147/voci con screamo.mp3

 

[gabriel g.]

The de-esser isnt working right, the vocals have no body. They sound like you put them on the ready mix. Try to mix the project with the vocals together.
Less is sometimes more!!!
Sometimes making an AUX bus and sending the vocals through it, works great.
Put an delay and and/or an reverb on the AUX and then another comp to glue it

 

[mattia.7]

exactly man..this is the problem,no body!will i create a fx-group with delay and reverb right?can you help me with some settings for reverb and comp in the AUX please?and to mix better the project with the vocals,what can i do?thank you very much

 

[mattia.7]

pleaase guys..someone can help me?

 

[GarethSE]

Blink 182?
Nice.

 

[Black neon bob]

Sounds nice dude!

Yes, the vocals need de-essing.. they just sound a bit too harsh in my opinion, maybe a bit too loud as well?
Try compression first as well.. see what that brings, should give it a more radio-friendly sound you really need for this type of music.

 

[mattia.7]

yeah man,blink 182..i compress it with ratio 20:1 and threshold -40db..do i have to use an other same comprezzor in a second buss for you guys?

 

[mattia.7]

http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/666147/voci con screamo.mp3
this is a new mix..help me to improve it please guys..