Can you give me feedback about this mix?

[CarlosBuitrago]

Im a newbie in metal production, but i want to improve and you're the ones that know how to do it. Please give me feed back

[SOUNDCLOUD]https://soundcloud.com/carlos-buitrago-1/testing-1/s-onMeE[/SOUNDCLOUD]

https://soundcloud.com/carlos-buitrago-1/testing-1/s-onMeE

 

[inertia]

It's a pretty ok start....the recording is clean and all the instruments are actually audible. The kick sounds correctly eqd but is too loud. The bass is also pretty high in volume in the mix and the guitars maybe could benefit from a low cut filter to help bring out the bass and drums a bit. You also have some weird issue with the first snare ...it has a different sound compared to the rest of the track and sounds really compressed. Is it the same sample? Also, maybe try some subtle effect on the lead to make it a bit interesting. Not a lot though if you are going for a straight clean sound.

 

[CarlosBuitrago]

Thank you! I really apreciate your help! Yes, it's a midi mistake, i will correct it right now, what do you mean about "subtle effect" ?

 

[inertia]

Thank you! I really apreciate your help! Yes, it's a midi mistake, i will correct it right now, what do you mean about "subtle effect" ?

Try some chorus or delay on the leads maybe....just enough so it leaves a present but not so it's so over the top. don't use it like it ketchup