Please give me feedback on this mix

[dale_a_smith]

Hey.

This is one track off an EP i'm working on. Please have a listen and give me some feedback regarding the mix and general balance of the track..

cheers guys n gals..

Dale

http://soundcloud.com/dale_a_smith/serpents-riseb

 

[arv_foh]

It sounds kinda thin. Give the bass guitar some lows to fill out the mix. I don't really like the "wah" guitar part (I think that's what it is), it doesn't really fit with the song. I think the guitar tone is pretty good, what did you use? I really like it when both guitars "kick in" (1:10). The vocalist kinda sucks but obviously there's not much you can do about that. I think the kick could use a little more beef too. Not a lot, but just enough to "fill it out" a little bit more.

 

[VWAS2009]

Give the kick some lows and a lil Click... I will try to post some Sub Kick samples i have sometime i think they will help with some of the "beef" of kicks...

 

[dale_a_smith]

hey guys

Thanks very much for that. The lack of warmth was a concern. i'll keep working on it.

The guitars are just Pod Farm. I got him ( he guys who plays everything )to record DI's with every part, then I put a second amp sim under each ( usually quite clean to fill the mids out and give a bit more definiation ).

Thanks again

Dale

 

[dale_a_smith]

http://soundcloud.com/dale_a_smith/serpents-riseb

ok. This is a bit of a remix. If you could spare the time to listen and report back id be very greatful

best regards

dale