can you judge my drum Mixing?

I would work on seperating the kick and snare some bit more, it feels almost like the kick is choking the snare under the spots where they are both playing.

The kick is also way too clicky for my taste. Also try cutting some 1KHz out of it with a wide Q.

Snare sounds pretty nice though, fat and not too dry!
 
In a mix, that snare is going to be completely lost. You may want to focus in on the direct mic sound a little more.
 
No, I know that, but you can still multi-out each component of the kit in your DAW's mixer too, i.e., the direct out snare mic of the sampler.

I did, every piece is one a specific channel,but maybe you're feeling that because the snare bottom and the snare top was on the same channel, I wanted to try something new