Canadian metal quality quandary

[Bmenz]

I've been chipping away at an album for the better part of this year and could use some fresh ears. Here's a 3 minute clip, no vox, no leads, just drums/bass/rhythm guitar.

Obviously there'll be some changes once I add more elements, but wondering at this point if anything stands out to you folks that I should be addressing?

http://menz.bandcamp.com/track/new-album-sample


Thanks!
-Brent

 

[Word Bearer]

Raise the overheads slightly on the kit. The kick is getting really lost, so I'd have another look at that.

 

[Bmenz]

Raise the overheads slightly on the kit. The kick is getting really lost, so I'd have another look at that.

Cheers.

 

[Serebrusband]

Hey man im no expert but the guitar sounds really empty

 

[Bmenz]

Hey man im no expert but the guitar sounds really empty

Trying to leave some room in the guitars for the bass to chunt around (I'm predominately a bass player so I'm biased in my writing). Proving to be difficult.


Anyone else got suggestions?