cant sleep, what do you think of this mix?

[s34nsm411]

trying to come up with a metalcoreish template for future recordings, hows this sound?

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=720702
"metalcore jam"

 

[TheIllicitOne]

I'm no pro, but I like it. The lead seems a hair loud to me though.

 

[Senseyete]

hey it sounds cool for me,i miss a little "bite" on the guitars and vocals but my first impression was really cool,i like the composition too!