check out this brutal death mix..

Great clarity. I would bring the overheads and the vox down a bit, and I'll bet you could get a little more girth in the low-mids of the snare without getting things too muddy. The guitar sound is perfect for this kind of stuff.
 
thanks guys,i'll check that right guitar out. the band wanted the vocals upfront, i originally had them down as well.

sorry about posting this in the wrong forum, i only realised after posting and then my internet connection took a shit. could a mod move this to the rate my mix forum? sorry about it my bad..
 
The overheads sound REALLY phasey. dunno if it's the mp3 conversion or what. Maybe too much boosting at 10kHz-ish? great clarity as stated before! try doing something about the overheads...