Cover of Scars - kind of a rate my voice thing

[jauernis]

I just did a quick cover of this for my vocals (this is out of my range so using this as a learning tool to improve) but can you guys give me feedback on the vocals, dont be too harsh give me more of a how you think I can get better feedback please and am I on the right track...guitars are shite mix is shite quick mix...thanks..

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1062640/Steve/PAPAROACHCover1.mp3

 

[jauernis]

bump any criticism would be cool even harsh...actually expect harsh lol

 

[Calippo Tecks]

Too much out of tune, but your actual voice sounds pretty alright.
I think it's a matter of practicing alot on your pitch.

 

[dcb]

yeah, it feels like like its out of your range. i wouldnt force your voice to into that range. maybe try tuning a wholstep down?
but i like the vibrato in your voice that shows here and there ! wished i had that ;-) !