Please rate my proggy mix!

[Freak Of Metal]

Hello. I am currently recording and mixing a song as part of an application for university. I would love to get some feedback on it before I send it off. The song I am posting is incomplete as there will be more vocals on the rest of the track. As I am on a tight schedule where the mix has to be done soon, I would really appreciate some quick pointers of parts in the mix that could use a quick fix. But be specific (don't mind the shit singing, I'm a guitarist). This is not by any means mastered yet! I might post the master later. If you have the time, then thanks so much beforehand.

NEWEST MIX UPDATE (and now complete song):

.WAV: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4299941/The%20Great%20Southern%20Gold%20Rush%20V2%20hi%20res.wav
.MP3: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/4299941/The%20Great%20Southern%20Gold%20Rush%20V2%20low%20res.mp3

 

[professorlamp]

where is it?

 

[Freak Of Metal]

Sorry. Up now. I think the bass is too loud. Proabably cause I'm mixing without a sub.

 

[Nuno Filipe]

Sounds good and the music has a cool vibe. But the voice is muffled, add some brightness to her. The drum could have more punch but I like how it sounds.

 

[Freak Of Metal]

Thanks. I've now uploaded what I hope is the last mix as I need to master ASAP. If anything is sticking out of the mix badly, or anyone has any suggestions for the mastering stage, I would be eternally grateful. I'm thinking I need to boost some of the highs to get it a little more airy and wider, and then the usual comp, limiter stuff.