My mix of a clip from my band's upcoming EP. Thoughts?

[mstone564]

I did this purely for fun and want some critique on how I'm doing so far.

I'm mainly wanting to know what you all think of the mix balance across the spectrum and the MASTER, which I'm hoping to improve soon!
Any other crit would be amazing as well! =D

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3689406/The Great Deciever Pre Pro 3.mp3

 

[MisSigsFan]

Sounds like every other deathcore mix nowadays. Not saying it's bad, but it's nothing special.

 

[mstone564]

Thanks...? Any help to make it stand out?

 

[Tommy Evans]

Did you double the clean singing? If not I think you should have, they sound too flat. not pitch wise, just life wise. other than that, I think i like it! Bass might be too loud?

 

[mstone564]

Haha, yeah just one line of singing. Our guitarist isn't the best ever, but gets the job done. And yeah I feel like there's something wrong going on in the 60-200 hz range of the bass that messing things up.
I just really want my mixes to pack a punch. =D