CRITICISM NEEDED! newmix

[XxRobbieChaosxX]

Redone mix.

They're a bunch of middleschoolers, guitar playing wasn't very tight at first.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1317792/ReckoningsMixes/Song4 RedoneTrevorVox_mixdown.mp3

Tell me what you think, and tel me where it could improve!

I'd very much appreciate it

Edit:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1317792/ReckoningsMixes/Song4 RedoneTrevorVox_mixdown_updates.mp3

Anybody have any advice on making the vocals sit better?

MORE UPDATESSS; lol

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1317792/ReckoningsMixes/Song4 RedoneTrevorVox_mixdown_updates2.mp3

 

[guitarguru777]

Kick sounds kinda plastic but other then that I like it.

Not a fan of the pig squeals though

 

[XxRobbieChaosxX]

Kick sounds kinda plastic but other then that I like it.

Not a fan of the pig squeals though

There actually wasn't any pig squeals

all exhales.

 

[guitarguru777]

I'm talking the vocal in general. They sound like 1 big pig squeel ....lol

 

[XxRobbieChaosxX]

yeahhhhh, im automation them up.

He wanted them "layered" like that. except it's nopt really layered. more of jsut awkward dual tracks.

 

[XxRobbieChaosxX]

made some changes:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1317792/ReckoningsMixes/Song4 RedoneTrevorVox_mixdown_updates.mp3

Anyone have any advice on making the vocals sit a bit better?

 

[rchoi54]

bring up the mids in the vocals and turn down the 8kHz and up.

guitars could use some EQing, they're missing something....

 

[XxRobbieChaosxX]

bring up the mids in the vocals and turn down the 8kHz and up.

guitars could use some EQing, they're missing something....

haha, yeah. i pretty much scooped the vocals.

and here's the guitars by themselfs if it helps point out what's missing:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1317792/ReckoningsMixes/Song4guitars.mp3

 

[rchoi54]

you filtered out a LOT of high end.

boost the 2kHz-8kHz back up by 4-5 dB.

and there's soooooo much distortion/gain on the guitars that it takes out their attack and clarity too much.

the guitars sound like you recorded them with a heavily 800-1200 Hz boosted mic that added distortion to everything/

 

[XxRobbieChaosxX]

you filtered out a LOT of high end.

boost the 2kHz-8kHz back up by 4-5 dB.

and there's soooooo much distortion/gain on the guitars that it takes out their attack and clarity too much.

the guitars sound like you recorded them with a heavily 800-1200 Hz boosted mic that added distortion to everything/

So what you're saying is "YOUR GUITAR TONE SUCKS, TRY A NEW ONE", right?