LOCAL METALCORE/DEATHCORE BAND, check out the mix?

[XxRobbieChaosxX]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1317792/ReckoningsMixes/Jawbreaker-Single/jawbreaker_test123.mp3

They're all around 16, vocals are eh to me and he knows i dont like them, haha.
Starts out as cheesy metalcore, ends as cheesy deathcore.

Crits on the mix? Any advice?

Also, drums are Slate/S2.0/real snare.
Guitars are PODfarm, bass is Nick Crow 7505 for clank track.
Synths are NI Massive

EDIT:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1317792/ReckoningsMixes/Jawbreaker-Single/jawbreaker_test123.mp3

sounding better? or worse?

Tried to make kick and snare punchier, added more highend to the guitars, added bassbooms and MORE effects on the ending breakdown, lmao.

 

[kernelxsanders]

sounds pretty good, sorta generic music but the mix is nice i like the meat in the guitars. but it sounds like it could use a little more high end, it kinda sounds like i have water in my ears.

oh wait, i just took a shower.

 

[superdgs]

pretty good dude, maybe give more punch to the kick and snare

 

[Backe]

like this alot. great guitar tone. all I can say is; raise kick and snare to make the mix more pumpy and aggressive, also, it could use alot more punch at the end, like a fat subdrop and reverse snares and all that jazz.

 

[oroinvictus]

Raise the kick and make it punchier. Raise the snare too.

 

[GarethSE]

Tell the rest of the band to euthanise the vocalist.

 

[ThriceFan]

i agree with whats been said already about the kick and snare. Guitar tone is really kickass i dig it. I think the vocalists mids sound pretty sweet maybe bring those up a little. The highs and lows are sub par. lol

 

[XxRobbieChaosxX]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1317792/ReckoningsMixes/Jawbreaker-Single/jawbreaker_test123.mp3

sounding better? or worse?

Tried to make kick and snare punchier, added more highend to the guitars, added bassbooms and MORE effects on the ending breakdown, lmao.

 

[right_to_rage]

I think it sounds better now.

 

[XxRobbieChaosxX]

The '123' link is the finished mix i sent the band.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1317792/ReckoningsMixes/Jawbreaker-Single/jawbreaker_test123.mp3

 

[RichMinerva]

Tell the rest of the band to euthanise the vocalist.

fuck i love you