CRITIQUE MY FIRST MIX!

I agree that the Gtr's are very overpowering. And I would consider taking those kick burst down a note. So depending on your tempo if that run is a 16th I would drop it down to an 8th notes. It could also be how fast you have your kick comp at making those kicks sound funky. Other then that sounds pretty good. May want to mess with the velocities and timing of your toms feels to make them sound more human and less programmed.