Critique my mix of these brutal riffs

jesus69lol

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So my friend had some spare guitar riffs laying around and we decided to make a song of it. The drums aren't exactly perfect, but I'm pretty proud of this mix. I haven't finished writing the drum line so I just cut the mix where I'm at.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8215939

Guitars are my xxx quadtracked into nebula using poi's program.

What can be improved?
 
The guitars sound pretty cool. There doesn't seem to be enough lows in the kick. Was there a bass track?
 
not in the version I printed down, but I do have one written/recorded. Trying to get my slap bass lines and finger bass lines to all sit nice together on the same track is a whole different thread.
 
I hear you, bass (alongwith most other instruments) is kicking my ass. I was just interested in what it would sound like with the bass up against the guitars. Sounds pretty good now though.