Critique my playing?

[ParsonsMatt]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=442291&songID=7750177

What do you think... Where should I work on?

 

[TravisW]

There was a pretty rough bend a little past 3/4ths of the way through. Your sweeps sound about 80% cleaner than your alternate picking, so I'd personally work on reversing that. You have a pretty decent vibrato going, although it might not be a bad idea to work up a few different vibratos, since the "slow and wide" won't fit every bill.

Overall, it sounds pretty decent. My laundry list would be:

1. Alternate picking
2. String bend control
3. Varied vibrato.

I like the wah work a lot!

 

[reaperscythe]

Pretty good playing!(nice sweep)

 

[ParsonsMatt]

Thanks! I'll work on the things you suggested!