Critique my songs

[Death Aflame]

Their supposed to be melodic death/black metal but since I cannot record they are in midi form.

This one is 'finished' that is it begins and ends as I intend but I will still do some rearranging if necessary:

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=D31EA238134B25DD

This second one I just started working on yesterday:

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=61EBC6CA75F1F45C

Any constructive comments and suggestions are welcomed. Thanks.

 

[Death Aflame]

No responses...Well lets try this again.

Here is a fresh (and working link) to that second song but in relatively finished form (still in midi):

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=411AAA867B9DAA2B

Any suggestions, comments would be really helpful. BTW it's supposed to be melodic death/black.

 

[Within The Ruins]

haha sounds funny in midi but sounds like it would be sweet. good structure. i want to hear it with drums

 

[Death Aflame]

Yeah midi sucks. Hopefully I'll eventually get some equipment to record it with real guitar, drums and vocals.