Crits

[Varambarry]

https://soundcloud.com/impostor-studios/deceitful-kings-mp3

If you have any questions just ask, Thanks.

 

[tmitchell33]

Link doesn't work!

 

[Varambarry]

Try it again, should be working now it was set to private by accident.

Thanks again.

 

[GearMan2point0]

Vocals are muffled bro. and thin. Also the kick is compressed wrong. As the double kick happens it dies, too long of a release I feel. Or it could be the compression on the master bus. Kick just needs more presence

 

[Varambarry]

Thanks for the reply man! Good info.

 

[Daybreak]

Really, really good mix IMO. But as other said, the kick have some problems. I would like it to be more audible. Maybe it's a compression problem, maybe it needs more high-end, don't know. Eperiment around!

 

[benjy]

Really good mix. I agree with the kick issue. The vocals, I don't know they are a tad muffled but I think it kind of works.

 

[Varambarry]

Thanks for the kind words!

 

[tmitchell33]

Cool! The guitars are a little high in the mix for my taste, reducing their level may bring out the kick too. Good work so far, a little more low mid would warm the mix up too, great job so far it's sounding good

 

[Varambarry]

Thank you! Always helpful advice on this forum.

 

[Soundscaper11]

Dat snareeee