daylight dies-esque riffs part 2 :o)

[samara]

I've been messing around today, trying to create something in the vain of daylight dies without any song structure or scale to go by instead just focusing on the atmosphere and I'm curious how this production works I fear it might be overcompressed I'm not sure.... comments are welcome...
http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/315602/t1.mp3

 

[samara]

anyone?

 

[2000ContourSVT]

The guitars sound kind of phasey and hollow, and also there seems to be some notes that don't sit well with the song. Those few drum fills that sound like a glitch could be taken out, they make the drums sound fake. It doesn't sound too compressed to me though.