Epic Writer's Block! - Djent

[djentleman91]

I know this is the rate my mix bit but i doubt anyone's gonna cry about me posting this. Started writing this song yesterday but can't seem to figure out how the next section should sound.

if anyone could give any helpful suggestions, that'd be awesome.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1789376/foundation12.m4a

thanks

 

[Siguros]

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[oroinvictus]

Sounds pretty good to me, although that lead could use some 'verb or echo or something to help bring more focus to it.

 

[TheToddGreen]

Goodness.... You post about writers block, and all i can notice is how jealous of your mix i am *Facepalm* What am I doing????? ugh

 

[djentleman91]

gave it a shot but not sure if it flows tbh.
seems like there's too much focus on the lead parts and also my mate pointed out apparently the intro lead is out of key?

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/1789376/foundations121.m4a

Goodness.... You post about writers block, and all i can notice is how jealous of your mix i am *Facepalm* What am I doing????? ugh

thanks man. it doesnt help having a good mix however when youve got no material to use it on lol

 

[TheToddGreen]

haha true. Ill take a shot at helping you write, im always down for colab work, if you don't mind helping me figure out how to improve my mix, it'll be easier for me to write hahaha

heres the thread (listen to the mix i posted in my most recent post, not the original)
http://www.ultimatemetal.com/forum/rate-my-mix-tone-threads/717082-little-jam-need-little-help.html