Feedback for my DM presentation front page.

[Oceanic Motion]

http://www.freewebs.com/myrkskog/things.htm

Is what I've got it looking like so far. What do you think? Should I lose Baphomet or the musicians? I'm just trying to get a decent front page and not have it cluttered.

Someone on another board that having the pentagram instead of the full pic off Baphomet would be better.

So what do you think?

 

[Hammer of Might]

they don't work for me....it's meant to be freewebS not freewebZ. It should work if you change that, because it did for me when I changed it.

Hope that helps.

 

[Oceanic Motion]

Thanx for pointing that out. Tis weird bcuz i just copied the link directly from the image properties.

 

[Hammer of Might]

Anyway, about the designs. Perhaps you should lose the musicians around the baphomet if you want it to look less cluttered.

Also, keep the baphomet that you've got. That Sigil of Baphomet logo is such a cliche in metal, and the other one is a lot cooler IMO.

I reckon that pentogram one portrays the wrong image of death metal as well, because it is a church of satan logo, and not all death metal bands promote that ideology - just my opinion.

Plus the Baphomet you're currently using is a lot better - it's more original and I think just looks better as an intro page - it looks like it's pointing down to the 'death metal' title.

Hope my opinions are useful

 

[Oceanic Motion]

Thanx. So I'll post a link to a version without the musicians.

 

[Oceanic Motion]

EDIT: just look at 2nd pic down.

 

[Hammer of Might]

Hhmm...I like it like that - it is only an intro screen afterall, and all it needs to do is give a tiny taster of the site within.

I guess you could just use a few of the musicians, but not all of them if you wanted to use up the space, but personally I think that new version looks cool.

 

[Oceanic Motion]

I think i might stick with 2nd version. Can you see all 3 pics on the /crap.htm page?

 

[Hammer of Might]

no, only the second one.

 

[Oceanic Motion]

Fuckin hell!!! Freewebs are shite. I need to find good free webspace, if it exists.

 

[Post_Scriptum]

i use lycos for the images i want to host

 

[Oceanic Motion]

they allow hotlinking?

 

[Life Sucks]

I think it looks cool the way it is.

 

[Oceanic Motion]

I've got another in the works. it'll be finished shortly, i'll add it to the same page as the others.

 

[genocide roach]

i like the top one. i dont think it looks cluttered. looks very nice
~gR~

 

[Oceanic Motion]

ok, no.3 is up. Me and my mum prefer it, although i expect most people wont. I thought using the cryptopsy demon worked better than Baphomet. Although i'm not too sure on the same type fx.

 

[Hammer of Might]

Yep, that third one is the best IMO Ageless! It's well balanced and not too cluttered. Plus the crypsopsy logo works really well!

I'd go for that one if it was up to me! \m/

 

[Oceanic Motion]

wicked. nice one mate. I find it strange that i really enjoy doing this shit even though its increadibly tedious at points.

 

[AngelWitch73]

The second image on that page is the best for a front page. Simple yet effective.

 

[Oceanic Motion]

What would be an appropriate animation to make? I'm looking through some ImageReady tutorials on The Web Machine and have just gotta thinking of something to make. Any ideas?