feedback on this mix

[mike rosenfeldt]

hey everyone. this is my first post. i thought i'd post a short little clip i made. i already have an ok idea about whats wrong with it but i'd like your opinions. don't go easy on me. i can take it.

http://soundcloud.com/mike-rosenfeldt/fire-alarm-i-am-the-fire-alarm

 

[iarebrandon]

guitar is too much mids. hi hat/ cymbals sounds like a robot, so adjust the velocities. bass is a little quiet in the mix. and imo you shouldn't pan the rhythm hard right like you did halfway through but thats only opinion.

btw i like the leads.

 

[mike rosenfeldt]

thanks for the feedback!! i actually had way to much bass in my first mix of the song. then i realized that and took a lot out. i guess too much. anyways glad you like the leads!