heres an small sample of my vocals(death delirium),I would like to read your opinion cuz , i've been practicing a lot for the past month.....it would be aprecciated, thanx
This "wet" or "moist" gurgle style is fairly limited, I feel. Because it is not easy to understand, and not very versatile you are going to only be able to use it during specific parts of songs. As of right now, I would say you should work on your control (getting an even tone throughout your performance), as well as your range (once you get that even tone, see what you can do above and below it).
If you want to stay in the gurgle style, I would suggest checking out a band like Terminally Your Aborted Ghost (http://myspace.com/tyag) because they pull it off quite well and could be something to work towards.