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[st33l]

Hey im thinking of make an ep with about 3-4 songs...but i have tried to mixed this and mastering my song and feel i have some problems...this lowend has very dully tone or how i should say...its not as clean as i want it...i have read on inet loads of how to manage that but i cant do it...can someone give me some support on this and also tell me more what can be done on this song...lov u
http://www.inzight.se/World Of Sin.mp3

 

[filipe1983]

Wow, those are some really cool vocals, is that you singing?

 

[st33l]

Wow, those are some really cool vocals, is that you singing?

No its my friend...we also have a coverband at www.inzight.se were we have some covers you can listen to if you want