First orginal song mix

[Brender500]

I usually just record and mix cover songs but I decided to try and record and mix my own song. So let me know how to mix is coming and just overall if the song is any good.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14691474/POF Mix.mp3

 

[Donovan S.]

You wouldn't happen to cover a lot of Metallica songs, would you?

 

[Brender500]

No.actually i have never covered a metallica song and i don't even know how to play any metallica song all the way through.I am guessing that is what it sounds like?Does it sound like old or new metallica? If it is new,then crap

 

[MAXMEDLOW]

Hammer Smashed Face

 

[Brender500]

I have actually never heard that song before because I hate Cannibal corpse. But yes the intros are alittle similar!

 

[Brender500]

So I have heard who it sounds like but can i get some crit on the mix or composition?

 

[Brender500]

update on the mix.Still have a few ideas i need to add in the song but this is what i got so far on the mix.please let me now how i can improve it.Also crit on the song composition would be nice also.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14691474/Final1 no vox.mp3

 

[Pdennis89]

i dont really hear cymbals. the guitars are really fucking tight though. nice job on that.

 

[Brender500]

I adjusted the cymbal volume so maybe there can be heard now and I changed the guitar tone cause i wasn't that happy with it.I am trying to get the kinda of tone the is ultra punchy.basically when the song kicks in at the beginning i want the listener to feel like they just got punched in the face.

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/14691474/Mix 1.mp3