First song with vocals... please rate!

[MetalMiller]

Here´s one of the first songs with vox i´m currently working on... what do you think?

http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=7442626&q=hi

 

[MetalMiller]

Anyone?... Anything would be helpful.

 

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I like the song. The drums sound pretty good, but those guitars aren't really doing it for me. They sound kind of fizzy and boxy to me.