First time tabbing

[ShadowOfDeath]

Any good guitar tabbers out there? I've been looking for the tabs to Elvenking's Skywards. So far the only thing online is the rhythm acoustic part. I'm trying to figure out the lead part. The lead i've started working on is the solo type thing that starts around 2:22 i have part of it worked out but i'm not totally sure if i got it right and could use a bit of help with this since it's my first tab and i've only played 1 and a half years so it probably won't be 100% accurate. I just randomly hit a note while goofing off to even know how to do this

(w/acoustic rhythm)

e|----------------------------------------------------------------|
B|----------------------------------------------------------------|
G|----------------------------------------------------------------|
D|-/12/14--/17-17/15/14-10/12-14p12p10/15-14-15-14p12p10------|
A|-------------------------------------------------------------12-|
E|----------------------------------------------------------------|

It's pretty basic. Does it sound sound about right? I'll post a clip of the song if i can know how to record just that part of the song.

For a first tab what does everyone think?