Fist post! hi guys! (ulterior motive ahead!)

[TreKita]

I recorded my band and am really happy with our new vocalist!

check out the song here:
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8633210

hope it doesn't suck too bad. haha


I'm just looking for a critique/help on making the vocals sit better and be clearer,it'd be great.

also, i lurked here a long time, and all this greatness round here inspired me to join, this is my very first post here!

i'm really happy this forum exists.

cheers.

edit: D'OH. i am so sorry, my compuer got stuck looping the page.

if any mods are checking, could someone delete the other threads?

one hell of a first impression.

 

[muckypup1]

I'll have a listen soon dude. You should really delete those other threads though man...

 

[Lionwing]

the vocal sounds pretty good, I was surprised. I think you need to fill that guitar tone out to balance the mix better

 

[TreKita]

i haven't figured out how to delete threads. i'm working on it.

Lionwing, thanks! I'm going for a middley (dare i say it, stop me now) Djenty tone, but i think the bass is just a bit weak in the song and needs to come up.

 

[Dalinkwent48@aim.com]

This song definitely has potential...the guitars do sound pretty thin though...and that clean part in the beginnin IMO doesnt really fit...its a sweet idea but maybe try writing something different in there?

 

[TreKita]

This song definitely has potential...the guitars do sound pretty thin though...and that clean part in the beginnin IMO doesnt really fit...its a sweet idea but maybe try writing something different in there?

well, there's actually more to it, lyric-wise. the abrupt change actually works with the flow of the song. (we've done it live, and it was apparently the "crowd favorite" song, so I'm wary to change it.
thanks for the feedback!

 

[Dalinkwent48@aim.com]

In that case "if it ain't broke dont fix it"

 

[TreKita]

In that case "if it ain't broke dont fix it"

haha, thanks duder!

anything else on the mix in particular strike you as bad? I'm open to anything to get a better mix.