"First one to email the band about this wins a tour of the Magical Kalmah Rehearsal Space" ... I am not so optimistic.
i noticed it too! ^^ and i noticed some grammar mistakes but im just a spoiled english teacher
anyway.. i typed them as the went - even though the temptation for correction was huge
haha just to let ya know i went thru them and there are a few typos.. in coward you have drunktard in there twice
in like a slave u have sile earlier instead of smile. just wanna let ya know so maybe u can send a revision email before they get posted