Futuralipse Near Your Bed, new polyrhytmic track, check and rate please

[dd_messenger]

Hi all,
new sketch ready. In this track I created atmospheric intro and bridge (near the end). I think guitar sound with more mids are better then previous.
Please rate material/mixing.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6309796

 

[dd_messenger]

Anybody please rate this. Or it's sounds like shit?

 

[dd_messenger]

Hi all,
I re-uploaded this song on soundclick. Please check it.
In new mix I made small changes in guitars tone, added guitar room reverb on guitars and changed snare sound.
Rate and enjoy. Thanks.