Going for an Aggressive/LOUD Mix

[Perishh]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/7198386/Third Song MP3.mp3

This is a 30sec clip I recorded, hoping to get my mixes more energetic and loud. Tell me what you think. Feel free to ask any questions/give advice

Thanks

 

[AerialThesis]

SUPER LOUD! I can't hear anything...