Hey, there are some good moments in there, over all I enjoyed it. Yeah it needs work, but it shows a lot of promise.
I'm actually suprized you were able to get the drums to sound good at all in Guitar Pro 5 lol, good work. But yeah the vocal recording is pretty poor it makes you sound like a grumbly old man instead of ass kicking. You should get a good and cheap 50 USD vocal mic.