Grindy/Feedback metal demo - Not djent - real drumz + vox

[-Loco-]

I am working on my band's new stuff and looking for thoughts on the writing? Mix isn't the best as it's just a demo and no 'mastering' proc. (went nuts with the vocal distortion).

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/104069213/Placid demo.mp3
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