Groovey oldschool track wants feedback

Room3005

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Nov 8, 2012
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A few days ago I had fun with a wah-pedal for the first time and this little track developed from it.

I would be really glad for suggestions, critics and comments on the overall production, sound and composition. What do you think? I want to learn :)

I was inspired of the sound of Mastodon's "Leviathan" and Lamb of God's "New American Gospel". I kinda like the trashy sound. Did I nail it?

Drums are "Studio Drummer" from Native Instruments, the bass is a ESP LTD55 and the guitar is a Peavy Predator. Recorded and mixed with Ableton.

Here it is:
 
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